3rd Draft Front Cover

I was given more feedback for my music magazine Front Cover. I chose to do another draft of the Front Cover, just so I could make the changes I needed to. The only feedback I was given was to:

• fill in any gaps left over with other cover lines or shapes.

Before:

After:

Before I added anything else to my Front Cover, I decided to move the One Direction cover line in the top right hand corner of the page up a bit further towards the masthead just so I could fill the gap surrounding the heart better. I then proceeded to add a new cover line below that is 'Steal Little Mix's Style', because just like the rest of the cover lines I used on my Front Cover, that will grab the attention of my demographic, because my audience also has interests of Fashion as well as Music. 

2nd Draft Double Page Spread

I was given areas to improve on my magazine Double Page Spread, the improvements I had to make were:

• Check spelling throughout the article
• Possibly add a drop cap to the opening paragraph of my article
• Make sure each column of the article is level with each other
• Add a couple more questions to fill the article out
• Make the font size smaller to make the article look more realistic

Before:

After: 

I decided to add a drop cap into the introduction to my article. I also added more questions to the actual article so that it looks more professional and finished. I changed the size of my font from 14 to 9, to be able to add more questions to my article.