2nd Draft Contents Page

With the feedback I was given, I decided to redraft my contents page. I was given the feedback of: 

Strengths of this assessment: 

• Good variation of suitable images 
• Strong links to target audience. 

Areas to improve in this assessment/ targets for next piece of work: 

• Cover should be reflected on Contents 
• Some notes on page to consider

The notes on the page were: 

• Possibly consider aligning colour block with text 
• Possible a little too much dead space around the front cover and each of the page numbers surrounding it. 
• Good idea:the magazine website, but perhaps move it, it seems a little bit out of place where it is. 
• Page Number 

Before:

After: 

I decided to get rid of the arrows for each of the page numbers and then proceed to move the page numbers on the side of the corresopnding article. I have also moved the website underneath the contents page masthead, becasue it looked out of place where I had it previously. When doing this, I also extended the 'We Love Shopping' column and the 'All about you'/ 'Wins and Offers' column to close the gap between the original columns and the magazine Front Cover. This benefits the contents page, because it makes the columns easier to read and I can space each article out better without being cramped.
 I also changed the Front Cover image in the top left hand corner to match it to the actual Front Cover of that issue.